A Shadow Bright and Burning by Jessica Cluess

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3 Stars (3 / 5)

Kingdom of Fire #1
A fun and magical regency adventure, I enjoyed A Shadow Bright and Burning, though the author’s writing style felt a bit novice. I found the idea of the Ancients quite interesting and unique, but felt the concept of them (as well as witches, magicians, and sorcerers) was thrust at us a bit too quickly. I felt like the character’s could have had a bit more depth, especially Blackwood. His sudden decision to confide in Henrietta seemed awkward and out of place. I wish that the relationship between them was explored a bit more. And I can hardly tell the difference between Dee, Wolff, and Lambe.

Despite my criticisms, I did enjoy the story. Hargrove in particular was an unexpected delight; I hope we see more of him in the next novel. I very much enjoyed the mythology that emerged, and I will always adore a regency setting. I look forward to seeing where the story goes from here. And considering this is Cluess’ first published novel, I anticipate that her writing style will mature with time. My last criticism cannot be said without spoilers, so my thoughts are hidden below.

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I do have to say, that I was a bit disappointed in Magnus’ character. For all his talk of being raised by women and forward thinking, his treatment of Henrietta seems hugely disrespectful and out of character. I’m really not quite sure why the author chose to do this with him, as I feel it really detracted from his character. Maybe she was trying to turn him into the philandering flirt that was respectful of women, but it didn’t come off quite right. Especially with his little “I can’t let you go,” at the end. There was so much that could have been done with his character, and I felt like this turn did not do him justice.

One thought on “A Shadow Bright and Burning by Jessica Cluess

  1. Megan says:

    I quite liked the overall plot with the ancients and it got me curious enough that I will actually read the next one. Although there were a couple too stupid to live moments!

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